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Kiss
07-16-2009, 09:55 AM
All feedback appreciated.

http://i453.photobucket.com/albums/qq259/Vaneskera/Art/kiss.png

Thanks.

KittyCat72
07-16-2009, 10:46 AM
Nice work, I like it.

Samus-Fan
07-16-2009, 11:36 AM
Too bright in the center, but the rest of it I like.
The colors all go great together, and there is even some flow from what I see.
Great job on it!

(Btw, Kitty, I'd try to be a little more...."constructive" then, 'Nice work, I like it.'. That is something a no-name member who came to advertise would post.)

KittyCat72
07-16-2009, 12:02 PM
Too bright in the center, but the rest of it I like.
The colors all go great together, and there is even some flow from what I see.
Great job on it!

(Btw, Kitty, I'd try to be a little more...."constructive" then, 'Nice work, I like it.'. That is something a no-name member who came to advertise would post.)

Well, I didn't have much more to say. I tried to think more, but I really couldn't come up with much. I do agree with you on the brightness thing though, now that I think about it.

Kiss
07-16-2009, 12:09 PM
Thank you.

Yuuki
07-16-2009, 02:41 PM
As Samus said, just a little bright in the center.
But overall, I love it! ^^
Maybe make the text a little more noticeable?
Unless that was what you were going for?

Iceskater101
07-16-2009, 05:08 PM
yeah as samus said its to bright in the middle
but i like the blend of the colors

LiNuX
07-16-2009, 07:16 PM
nice job but I have to agree, it does get a bit too bright. lowering that light a little bit would make it perfect - I like the other effects you used - they all fit well, the bright middle just takes most of the attention away from the rest.


keep it up though :) practice is the key

Kiss
07-16-2009, 07:49 PM
Thanks. The text is intended to be hidden, to anwser your question, Yuuki.