Trust. [Poem.]

[Yuuki]

Okay so it's depressing.. I know... XD
C&C?

You have hurt me so many times before,
I don't know if I can trust you anymore.
You say you want to be my friend,
But that means I must trust you.
With all of my secrets,
And I don't know if I can do that.

I don't know if I can be your friend,
Because every time I become your friend,
I end up falling for you yet again.
For that charm of yours,
I don't know if I can put my heart through that once more.

Love is giving someone your heart.
And trusting them not to break it.
I trusted you with my heart,
And look how that turned out.

[LiNuX]

:'(

beautiful.

P.s. you don't have to trust your friends. I don't trust most of mine...they are just there and I'm here.

[Yuuki]

Thanks<3

This is true, but he knows every little detail about me and after all he put me through it'd be difficult either way. :x

[Subb]

that poems was very touching yuuki, and linux was right about not having to trust your friends. You only need to trust yourself and instincts to know if your "friends" are out to get u or screw you over. Thanks for sharing that poem with us hope to read more of your poems.

subby

[LiNuX]

Thanks<3

This is true, but he knows every little detail about me and after all he put me through it'd be difficult either way. :x

Probably have an idea who it is. And you should add new details about yourself so over time, he'll know very little about you. Make a ton.

Just a thought.

[Yuuki]

@Subo: Thankks<3
But no I totally agree with him, I probably only fully trust 3 or 4 of my friends?
The rest are mostly just "hey, hi, hello" sorta people.

@Linny: Yeah, I'll work on that. I like the thought thoughh(:
Still working my way past it all.

My sorta-friend told me I should post my work, so I'm going to start doing that now.
This is just a start of many poems. :D

[LiNuX]

This is just a start of many poems. :D

Poetry is a good way to express yourself. One day you might just get published. Can't wait to see more :)

[Yuuki]

Poetry is a good way to express yourself. One day you might just get published. Can't wait to see more :)

Indeed(:
And haha Idk about that, but perhaps!
I used to write a lot more, I think I may get back into it.

[jango]

nice yukki .. i'd nudge you towards margaret atwood for comfort if ur into poetry .. also seems to fit your style from this poem and the one in the other thread

[Project Blaze]

Nice poem. I'm not too good at poems myself, despite me being all perfectionist-like with my grammar. :/ But that's really good. I hope I can read some more that ya come up with. ^_^ And it wasn't depressing, it was eloquent. :)

[Yuuki]

nice yukki .. i'd nudge you towards margaret atwood for comfort if ur into poetry .. also seems to fit your style from this poem and the one in the other thread

Hmn, sounds familiar.
I am a huge fan of EdgarAllenPoe<3 hehe(:
I'll take a look!

@Infernal: I am huge Grammar Nazi that throws her feelings at the pc screen or on paper. :D
Thankies<3

[Project Blaze]

Kewlz! ^_^ Nothin' wrong with that. :) I should get back into that too. lol At some point I quit doing it for some reason. :(

[Yuuki]

You should! I quit too but now I love it again haha.

[Project Blaze]

lol I'll try to, but gawd am I rusteh! ;_;

[Yuuki]

XD it might take a while hahaha. It did for me.

[Project Blaze]

lol Prolly will, but I'll try. ^_^ Just don't be too criticize-happy! ;_;

[Yuuki]

Oh of course not!
I can't wait to read some of your stuffles(:
I'm working on an Alice in Wonderland poem at the moment.

[Project Blaze]

I never got the chance to read that. I heard the book's good though.

[Yuuki]

Ohh the books are amazingg.
Movie is amazingg.
And I can't wait for Tim Burton's version to come out! NEXT WEEK!(:

[Project Blaze]

That's weird, I didn't see any commercials or anything about it. But then again, I do skip a lot of 'em. lol Maybe that's why I don't know about any new games so much. :/