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Kiss
02-06-2008, 01:51 PM
The Diary of Madeline Scoper
The ocean journey

By Laura N. Klein

April 3rd 1645
My name is Madeline Scoper. I am 13 years old. I live in England. For now. My family is going to board a ship in five days to America. I have heard many rumors. People say pirates attack and you will run out of food people will get disease. They say many who board these ships are kept under deck and may never see sunlight again. My parents are going to try to buy land and start a farm. I have a twin sister we are identical twins, her name is May. I also have an older brother named Scott. Scott is 16. When May and I were 11 May kept a diary. He looked in it and revealed all her secrets. I hope he doesn’t find mine.

April 8th 1645
Oompf! Today we got aboard our ship, sky hooper. This journey! It’s supposed to be very long and very brutal. It seems that way already and we’ve only been on ocean for 6 hours. We are mostly stuck under deck.
Will I live to see the sky again? That comes thru everybodys’ mind. So many thoughts! Will pirates attack? Will disease come? Will the rats eat all our food?

April 24th 1645
I am sorry I have not written. Scott is sick. I don’t know what to think. I sometimes fell happy because he is such a cruel brother. But I also feel sad. He is my brother. The ships doctor examined him, he believes Scott will die. We all started weeping. Scott is so weak. He is breathing and his heart is pumping but he is expected to die.
We already short on food! 4 people have died 16 are sick out of our 100 people. If only Scott were well then my family would be okay. I pray hard every moment.

April 28th 1645
Scott is dead, his body has been thrown overboard, with sad regards. I'm not sure but it looks like mother is to give birth, but I'm still unsure. Food is already really low, the other day i found two rats in my hammock. Why are the ships so infested with rats?

July 15th 1645
I am sorry i have not written i have caught the disease. Today the doctor said i have recovered. I have forgotten lots. i fogot Scott is dead i forgot about this diary, I forgot how to walk, mother showed me everything again. May seems to have caught it to... and father.

July 16th 1645
I am sitting by may she is breathing steadily but is sick. I dad cold water on her forehead. I must not lose my twin father has also gotten better, the doctor said he had some disease that last 48 hours but is life threatening i forget its name. I am low on ink my inkwell is almost empty. I can't beleive Scott is gone.

LiNuX
02-06-2008, 04:14 PM
cool diary, did you write that?

she should throw her brother off the ship when they board since he's so cruel lol

"he slipped :D"

Jaykub
02-06-2008, 04:25 PM
Wow thats cool. where ya get it

conman1000
02-06-2008, 05:10 PM
Wow thats cool. where ya get it

I think she wrote it.

Kiss
02-06-2008, 05:21 PM
I did write it, i've been reading bunches of those diary books lately, it inspired me.

LiNuX
02-06-2008, 05:52 PM
I did write it, i've been reading bunches of those diary books lately, it inspired me.

thats cool then, lets you see thru the eyes of someone on a pilgrimage to come to the americas

keep it up, make her push her brother off though, that'll be funny lol :twitcy:

conman1000
02-06-2008, 06:27 PM
thats cool then, lets you see thru the eyes of someone on a pilgrimage to come to the americas

keep it up, make her push her brother off though, that'll be funny lol :twitcy:

She did, technically.

Kiss
02-06-2008, 07:07 PM
lol. Yeah it did happen the body was thrown overboard.

LiNuX
02-06-2008, 07:19 PM
that entry wasn't there before!!! lol but funny haha

conman1000
02-06-2008, 07:26 PM
She edited it at 5:15, 30 minutes later you posted with a recommendation of what she should do next. :twitcy:

Kiss
02-06-2008, 07:57 PM
lol, maybe he had been staring at the thread for 31 minutes.

LiNuX
02-06-2008, 08:04 PM
lol, maybe he had been staring at the thread for 31 minutes.

yea i've gone afk a lot watching threads lol

but it could also be that I skipped over that little passage since it looked like i already read it before until i was told you had already put it up

either could be the case lol

Kiss
02-07-2008, 09:42 AM
Writing new chapter!