Slave Behave

[Kiss]

Slave Behave
Freedom Just out of reach
Wishing to get out when Mas'er Heart leaves to preach
Miz Lilly has the whip
I must behave, or on top of me it will say R.I.P
Hiding in the trees
I hear a faint sneeze
A man has come for me
His name is Lee
Over hills through trees
He leads me to freedom with ease

Note: This is just a poem I wrote with the person being a slave and escaping.

Enjoy.

[rukisuto]

Hm, I like it :]
I think you should elaborate and show the slave's feelings more.

[Kiss]

Ahwell i never said i used feelings :P