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Kiss
02-23-2008, 07:42 PM
Caseninie
Casininie dear
I'm afraid this will be my last tear
Death is upon me
My corpse is probably the last of me you will see
My hand trembles as i think.
To the depths of Hell will i sink
Or up to heaven on a golden wing
Which presence of which king?
Will there be afterlife at all
I will know as i begin to the death fall
Remember me please
I give you the family to seize

Story behind the poem
This one was pure thought. A person was writing to another as death came upon her. Is the an afterlife? This is a question unable to be answered by living human. The question of eternity.

LiNuX
02-23-2008, 08:04 PM
omg you just reminded me so much of my 12th Grade AP English teacher lol, he used to bring in a lot of poems dealing with death and stuff lol

but none of his had rhymes or were this short, more like 5-6 page long poems lol

i like this one, keep up the writing :D

Jaykub
02-23-2008, 09:12 PM
Omg goodness. Do more

glenofimaal
02-23-2008, 09:53 PM
wow i love it that scares me too