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Kiss
02-26-2008, 05:02 PM
As I Ran
A creature was chasing me
I ran as you see
The leaves crunched under my feet
"I have to run" I thought "or I'm deadbeat"
It was Goxxie chasing me
She not the girls thats pretty and drinks tea
It was dark
Above me i heard a lark
I was lost in the hollow
With a monster chasing me what sorrow
I saw the moon full as can be
Staring down on me
I was tired Goxxie was not
"Well I'm caught"
Visions of me came to be
Eaten by her like cheddar cheese
But then i saw
She was gone and in front of me was ma!

Story behind the poem
pure thought nothing more.

Jaykub
02-26-2008, 05:22 PM
Not bad I like how there getting longer

conman1000
02-26-2008, 05:30 PM
Very good poem Freebee.