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Kiss
03-03-2008, 06:24 PM
Try Me
Hit me with rock
Stick a snake in my sock
Get a swarm of bee's
Chasin' me
Try me
I bet you please
You won't win
You'll just have burnt skin
Trifle Doom
You'll be first to your tomb
Hahahahaha
Rah rah
I'll beat you
No matter what you do
Strong I am
I'll battle the army of Afghanistan (no offense)
A knife to the chest
Laid to the rest
I will win
Watch it Lynn

Dedicated to: Chase
Please oh please
Good comments please

BTW
You can request a theme for a poem it will be dedicated to you. But for a cost 5 GFP per poem.

LiNuX
03-03-2008, 06:53 PM
lol @ stick a snake in my sock

fighting words in that poem, good job, t he second line made me laugh :D

keep it up :D

rukisuto
03-03-2008, 07:48 PM
I like that poem :]
Agreed. The second line made me laugh.
Lol.

Jaykub
03-03-2008, 07:49 PM
I starting to think all of the ones you do are the same.... AWESOME. Love this one too

LiNuX
03-03-2008, 07:54 PM
I starting to think all of the ones you do are the same.... AWESOME. Love this one too

they are the same style and rhythm

you know what that's called?

POETRY!

Jaykub
03-03-2008, 07:55 PM
they are the same style and rhythm

you know what that's called?

POETRY!

OMG its my post but in diff words. Freak Out lol:mask:

glenofimaal
03-03-2008, 08:16 PM
this is my favorite so far

keep it coming

KittyCat72
03-03-2008, 08:19 PM
That was good... maybe the best yet. Lol, I'll request a poem. I want it to be about kitties. I'll send you the GFP now.

Kiss
03-04-2008, 06:51 AM
Okay I'll work on it now.