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Kiss
03-07-2008, 03:40 PM
Smile Begone
Turn the smile upside down
Make it a frown
Joy is gone
Disappeared also is the sun
Silently weeping
When your supposed to be sleeping
Sadness Sneaking
Happiness you are seeking
Days are bleak
In horribleness sadness can't be beat
Friends you'll never meet
Joy is dead meat
None of fun
Those days are done
Creatures creeping
Cuts deepening
My heart my sole
Life is ever now so dull

Nerdy Knight
03-07-2008, 03:48 PM
Very good! I'm a poetry fan myself, and I've gotta give it up for that poem! Very well done!

Kiss
03-07-2008, 03:52 PM
Why thank you. f=/

Jaykub
03-07-2008, 06:45 PM
Not bads I like all the ones ya do