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Kiss
03-26-2008, 06:40 PM
Wounded
Horrible wounds
Scary sounds
On the death bed
What more could there be said
Strangeness at wake
Hearts at stake
Deathly coming
Killing with the cunning
Just so,
An untied bow
Horrible art,
Thats just the start
Punish
Oh rubbish
Starved or beaten
Or eaten
Goodbye
Time for me to die

Nerdy Knight
03-26-2008, 08:17 PM
Very nicely done! I enjoy your poetry. I like to do some myself, but I'm nowhere near as good as you. I'll give ya a +rep for that!

Scott
03-26-2008, 08:50 PM
Yeah that's pretty good too.